My Seahawks vs Falcons Review

[burgers_59]

This is my writeup of today's win from my blog, let me know what you think!
The title is 'Sweet Revenge'

http://pugetpower.weebly.com/sports.html

 

[Timberhawk]

Thanks for the write up. I live in KC now and couldn't see the game. I appreciate the details.

 

[rightbench]

It's a really good write up. My one suggestion would be to change your background color or increase your font size. Very hard to focus over the course of a longer article. Otherwise, good points made.

 

[burgers_59]

Thanks for the input! Will try and fix the text problem.

 

[woodstockme]

Christina Michael also played in the Jacksonville game I believe - when they did not use Marshawn much in the second half -

 

[C-Dub]

Nice writeup.

Lots of text. My generation needs more bullets and pretty pictures.

 

[Blitzhawk]

My suggestion: put a big header for the offense and defense; then break the huge paragraphs up into separates for the different parts of the D or O. Just easier read long articles w/ more breaks and appears less intimidating to us...well...umm... tl/dr sorts. I just get lost sometimes in those long paragraphs.

Good write up/recap though.